That time of year
thou may'st in me behold
When yellow leaves,
or none, or few, do hang
Upon those boughs which
shake against the cold,
Bare ruin'd choirs,
where late the sweet birds sang.
In me thou see'st the
twilight of such day,
As after sunset
fadeth in the west,
Which by-and-by black
night doth take away,
Death's second self,
that seals up all in rest.
In me thou see'st the
glowing of such fire
That on the ashes of
his youth doth lie,
As the death-bed
whereon it must expire
Consum'd with that
which it was nourish'd by.
This thou
perceivest, which makes thy love more strong,
To love that well
which thou must leave ere long.
It's sonnet of an older man to a younger one who has been friend and admirer. I always thought it was “Pale ruined choirs,” not “Bare
ruined choirs,” for some unaccountable reason. I knew it referred the chancel, that part of the building where
the choir sang, not the singers themselves, but I used it to refer to people I sang with in a pub in London in 1997. Like them, I had once sung well and might have
aspired to even more with discipline.
That was now past, but the melancholy was quite mild. The singing was for the pleasure and
camaraderie of it now, and how much loss is that, really? A ruined church, of
which there were many in Shakespeare’s day 60 years after the dissolution of
the monasteries carries something of grandeur of it even in its decline. One
can find many commentaries, all wiser than anything I can bring you, but
two things in the second line did jump out at me, which I think are consistent
with the mood of the poem as a whole.
The leaves are yellow, not brown.
While later death may be suggested, death has not yet arrived, as also
with the embers below, and those have beauties of their own beyond mere
autumnal melancholy. Supporting this is the phrasing yellow leaves, or none, or few. If the idea was to suggest decay
and death it would have been yellow
leaves, or few, or none in a pattern.
The course is reversed in mid sentence.
No, it’s not no leaves, my lad. The day is still fine.
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